Critique my essay: a story about autism

<p>Can anyone read and provide constructive feedback on my essay, as well as 3 short answers?</p>

<p>-Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you. 500 words</p>

<p>-List and describe three unique factors that have most shaped who you are (any obstacles you have faced or passions you have developed are especially relevant). 100 words x 3</p>

<p>Just leave a comment, and I'll PM them to you. Thanks!</p>

<p>PM with prompt/title.</p>

<p>I can help…PM me.</p>

<p>mkay PM me</p>

<p>I’ll gladly read it…PM me</p>

<p>Sure, PM me.</p>

<p>I’ll read!</p>

<p>pm me! i’d love to help</p>

<p>I’d love to read it and be of some assistance for you</p>

<p>I’ll read it and give you perspectives of a parent of an autistic child.</p>

<p>Sure thing. I’ll take a look at them. PM 'em over. =3</p>

<p>Hey, I’m game. PM me and I’d be happy to read/critique for you. I’m class of 2013 too, so no worries, ha!</p>

<p>PM mate, I’ll be happy to give feedback :)</p>

<p>sure thing! I’d love to hear about something regarding with topic. my relative has this disease.</p>

<p>PM me :D</p>

<p>Pm i have a similar essay</p>

<p>ill read it!</p>