Critique My UC 200 word essays?

<p>anyone willing to critique/read my 200 word responses for the UC's? I'd really appreciate it.</p>

<p>I'm almost done making revisions to my 600 word one, and I'd really appreciate some feedback.</p>

<p>Thanks in advance!</p>

<p>I will! :)</p>

<p>Sure thing, PM it to me.</p>

<p>ya, send me a pm</p>

<p>Anyone else?</p>

<p>BTW, I just finished my 600 word response, so I'll PM that to you guys also...</p>

<p>sure, pm your essay. I can look it over.</p>

<p>Ill read both and give u some feedback!</p>

<p>ill read it</p>

<p>I'll take a look at them.</p>

<p>pm me as much as you want</p>

<p>I'll critique them =p.</p>

<p>I'll critique them =p.</p>