Read my 200-word essay?

Applying to College
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<p>Can anyone grab a few minutes to read one of my 200-word essays for UC application, and 1) tell me what impression they have; 2) critique it?</p>

<p>I'd really appreciate it. <3</p>

<p>Post or PM me to send it to you.</p>

<p>P.S. Please do so only if you'll really constructively critique it.</p>

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<p>Lol, I pushed my own post down by responding to other threads.</p>

<p>So bump.</p>

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<p>i'll give it a try.. i have to leave soon though</p>

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<p>I'll read it.</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>

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<p>If you would like a critique and opinion, send me your essay and i will analyze it.</p>

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<p>Thanks guys for doing this; however, I've only gotten one response back. :&lt;/p>

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<p>i'll analyze it</p>

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<p>I'll give it a go.</p>

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<p>i will read it. pm me</p>

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<p>ill read if u want</p>

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<p>Can I just get one more new head of opinion? I've only gotten 2 people to respond.</p>

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<p>I'll read, PM me.</p>

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<p>i'll give you a good critique. pm me</p>

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<p>sure I'll
just PM</p>

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<p>sure. ill read it =)</p>

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<p>ill read..PM it over</p>