Critique My UC Essays #2,3

<p>Would anyone like to read my UC essays for the 2nd and 3rd prompts? I'd prefer some feedback by the end of the week.</p>

<p>i'll read it</p>

<p>PM me</p>

<p>i'd be happy to help, pm me</p>

<p>pm me
i'll do</p>

<p>Sure I'll read it :)</p>

<p>I'll see what I can do! :)</p>

<p>pm me ill read it</p>

<p>I'll check it out.</p>

<p>sure, I'll be happy to help you :)</p>

<p>wanna exchange?</p>

<p>ill read it</p>

<p>I'll gladly read it, pm it to me anytime</p>

<p>i'll read it, om me anytime..</p>

<p>love to!</p>

<p>pm me</p>

<p>what did you do for your #3? I can't tell whether we should just write a personal statement type essay for them to get a better idea of us or something specific that they haven't seen about us yet.</p>

<p>i wanna read! sick of mines already</p>