Critique on personal situation essay

<p>Hey can any parents please read an additional essay I sent regarding my personal situation. This is my second additional essay. I would greatly aprpeciate your views and thoughts on this essay and whether it would help. Can you please pm or post in this thread if interested? Thank you. I truly appreciate it..</p>

<p>Iwannatopcollege</p>

<p>I'll read it</p>