A little too abstract and Unappealing?

College Essays
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<p>Hey everyone, I am wondering whether the essay I wrote is too abstract and therefore unappealing to Colleges. Is there any kind soul who would take their time to read it. I would also be happy to read your essay.</p>

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<p>I’ll be happy to read it. Just PM it to me</p>

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<p>Thank you! But first I have to make more than 15posts so I can send it lol.</p>

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<p>Me too. I am a parent and I am new to this. I just found out what a PM is and I am posting everywhere so I can reply to my PMs. BTW, I love to read your essay.</p>

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<p>Sure, I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>PM me with your topic, essay and an e-mail for me to send it back to you with comments.</p>