Critique/Rate Essay about Leadership? (very personal)

College Essays
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<p>Can anyone read over my essay and possibly suggest ANYTHING I could do to improve.</p>

<p>Obviously this is my rough draft </p>

<p>Thanks</p>

<p>-Elite</p>

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<p>I can read it, just PM me! :-)</p>

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<p>Sent it to you ^</p>

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<p>I’ll read it! Not sure if I can receive PMs since I’m so new, but feel free to shoot me an email. (:</p>

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<p>PM me and i’ll read it as well</p>

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<p>@darkrecon sent it to you</p>

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<p>I’ll read it :)</p>

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<p>I can read it.</p>

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<p>@ilovelifewow and @halcyonheather sent it to you both!</p>

<p>Please get back to me asap!!!</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

<p>-Elite</p>

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<p>I’ll read it</p>

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<p>I’ll read it</p>

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<p>Hey, I can help edit your essay!</p>

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<p>PM it and I’ll check it out!</p>