<p>Hey is anyone willing to read my rough draft? This is essay is for the UC's and i need to cut my words down to 200 and i have 257! If anyone would like to read it and give me some feedback on what to cut out....what to add that would be great! This is just a rough draft...but idk where to go with this!!! Any help would be great thanks</p>
<p>I'll give it a shot if you want, PM it to me!</p>
<p>Thanks for your insight enysome1344 i appreciate it...anyone else willing to read?</p>
<p>i willl help</p>