<p>so i tried the "cheesecake factory" test on my "why chicago" essay, as someone earlier suggested. (after replacing U or C w/ cheesecake factory, if ur essay made sense, then it wasnt good)..</p>
<p>mine made better sense..</p>
<p>haha, are you serious? Mine is just hilarious if you do so. Here's my last line:</p>
<p>"Going to the Cheesecake Factory would be more than just going to college- it would be welcoming my mind home."</p>
<p>Durn it, I knew I should have gone to culinary school...</p>
<p>Here's my last line:</p>
<p>"As my host handed me a strangers dress shoes in the lobby of his dorm on a Saturday morning, I realized that the Cheesecake Factory is the place for me."</p>
<p>"And as I lowered my eyes to where "Cheesecake Life" was conveniently situated on top of my calculus textbook, it hit me -- this is why I want to go to the Cheesecake Factory; this is why I feel as though I would belong there."</p>
<p>Needless to say, this was preceded by a paragraph extensively detailing my love for cheesecake.</p>
<p>Everyone loves cheesecake, silly.</p>
<p>Actually, I know some people who don't like cheesecake. Crazy, I know. I always bring cheesecake to club food gatherings.</p>
<p>lol, those are some funny lines.</p>
<p>and I LOVE cheesecake. Although the Cheesecake Factory is kinda expensive...</p>
<p>I don't like cheesecake, actually.</p>
<p>But these lines are HILARIOUS. None of mine work well. I guess that's a good thing?</p>
<p>Is Cheesecake Factory a good place to look for an internship? Scrumptious.</p>
<p>hmm, i'd be okay with just working there and having some leftovers of the day!</p>
<p>mmm.... cheesecake...</p>
<p>The Cheesecake Factory uniquely captures the intellectual breadth of my interests.</p>
<p>Yum.</p>
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<p>.< wow, mine is .. blah! haha</p>
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<p>well.. before i talk about my essay.. i want you to know that I absolutely love the cheesecake factory.. i just happen to friggin love that place and if i had a choice to go to school there, i just might. </p>
<p>that said, my essay is scary....</p>
<p>The cheesecake factory is edible; its menu, ever-filling and ever-abundant, engages me in a weird way, mindlessly teasing and auspiciously insulting my naivete. It is not the Haydn part of me, or the Monet part of me, or the Federer part of me, or the Fermi part of me, or the Naked cowboy- running wildly about Time Square- part of me, but 'tis me, yes, me and the only me, frankly and secretively savoring a piece of that cake from the Cheesecake factory, yes, the biggest part of that infamous cake. </p>
<p>My ending didnt make any sense, as opposed to the rest of my essay.. so i knw i ended on a good note.,</p>
<p>Located in a vibrant milieu, the Cheesecake factory promotes thinking in an unfamiliar and productive way- the education here, in my opinion, is an intellectually busy intersection: the students, teachers, and community all work there, and all find their way.</p>
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I don't like cheesecake, actually.
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<p>blasphemy!</p>