<p>I scraped my original essay because it sucked and I'm starting a new one, but so far I only have the introduction and I'm really lost. Would anyone be willing to read my intro and maybe give me suggestions!? I will really really really appreciate it.</p>
<p>please, would anyone like to review my essay? I really need some feedback because I'm afraid the essay sucks.</p>
<p>sure i just submitted by app. PM me</p>