Background
- I’m currently in 9th grade at an Asian private school, in the international program on full scholarships, so I really want very good financial aid at these schools because my family will only be willing to pay around 8-10k per year.
- I’m applying for boarding school in the 2022-2023 academic year
- I have just transferred to this private school, prior to 9th grade, I spent 3 years studying at a magnet middle school (around 1000 kids) for Sciences and English, I was in the English Specialized Class
I’m applying for most of the top 20 schools, I have interviewed for SPS (which went quite well) and St Andrews is also on the top of my list. I’m wondering where can I improve and can I get into BS with good FA.
*Notes: I can probably reapply next year so if you see where I can improve in my CV, please recommend. Thank you very much for the help
- Grades:
- My 6th-8th grade is quite good, with the same GPA of 95/100 for all semesters, I have some 100s but 88s (literature) as well
- My current GPA is around 96-97, I’m aiming to make it 97 for my first semester of 9th grade
*** Awards**
- Debate ( 3 years)
- I’m the finalists for the National Debate Team
- Break at a national debate tournament
- Debate Captain of Middle School Team
- Best speakers and 2nd best speaker at 2 other tournaments (regional)
- Schools
- Outstanding student award for 3 years
- In the English and Literature School’s Team to compete in regional competition but was canceled due to Covid
- Several 1st prizes and 2nd prize school’s academic awards (out of 200 kids)
- Scholarships
- Talent Scholarship for Boarding schools (this one is a national range) worth around 100,000 dollars for 4 years of highschool ( after 4 rounds of competing and won this award out of 100 kids)
- Another full talent scholarship for a private school in Vietnam (also a national one)
- Sports
- I was in the school’s badminton team for 2 years, have been playing badminton for 7 years but hasn’t competed in much competitions
- I got 2nd and 3rd prize in the school’s Swiming competition
- I’m practicing for school volleyball tryout
- Arts (4 years)
- I was the director/active actors of more than 5 schools’s play
- School’s choir
- Model United Nations (2 years)
- Best Delegate, Hon Men at several national-range model UN conferences
- Organizer team for a national UN conferences
*Extracurriculars: This one I think will be the most impressive part in my CV since my middle school did not offer opportunities to compete much.
- Student Government: Vice President / Ex- Student Representatives in StuCo at my middle school (2 years)
- High leadership position at student-led charity organization founded in 2016, aiming to help minorities and ensure their access to education, was the member of this org for 3 years (most impactful) (3 years)
- Summer Intern at a non-profit educational startup (topic: ensure access to education) - I’m still doing it (6 months)
- Researcher and Writer at a Feminism Campaign (3 months)
- Head of Finance in a project that translates English book into our language and sells it, cooperating with a Publisher Company (2 months)
- I have a blog for books and bullet journaling as well (1.5 years)
Application tingz
- I go test-optional due to Covid and the urgency of the application
- Essays: Im a quite decent writer and I think my essay topic is quite good
- Rec-let: I think this thing will reveal a lot of parts about me so, just hoping tho
- Interviews: I did one with SPS it went well, im a good at interviewing so much hope there , but I received good signals until the end of the interview when the interviewer ask me if i have any top school on my list and if so name it to them so that they can introduce me to them?, idk what this part means, can u guys help me
another question is; if all the schools reject me I could apply for grade 11, so how do you guys think i can improve my cvs and all that. thank you so much for reading it. have a nice day !!