<p>I wrote an essay that really focuses on a specific trait I have but it doesn't tell a specific story. It focuses more on the habits that accompany this trait and what it has taught me. A lot of articles or tips about writing college essays seem to say that I need to show through a story and not tell. Is it really that important that I do that?</p>
<p>You don’t need a story, no, but you do need to SHOW through specific examples and not just talk about the habits and traits you have. SHOW is the key word :)</p>
<p>Best of luck,
- Mike</p>
<p>You could always use a specific anecdote in your first paragraph that shows how you once exhibited that trait.</p>
<p>Be sure to also conclude with what it has taught you…and how you have changed as a result…</p>
<p>A somewhat famous man once said “break any of the rules before you say something outright barbaric.” I think this quote applies here. If your essay works, I don’t think you MUST tell a story.</p>
<p>You just need to figure out if it <em>works</em> or if it is too vague/philosophical. Give it to someone experienced with college essays, and see what he/she says on a general level.</p>
<p>PS Re-reading my reply, I feel like I sound like a really dumb guy, but I’m too lazy to edit. Oh well…</p>