Do you think these were good essay examples?

<p>For the June SAT, I used two examples: The American Revolution, and Einstein's discovery of the Photoelectric Effect as two examples of achievement that led to other challenges and questions...do you think those were good examples? :D</p>

<p>anyone???..</p>

<p>Sure, I think any example is valid in the SAT essay as long as you are able to convince them that the examples are relevant to your thesis. If you described the examples in detail, you should be good. </p>

<p>I would have personally gone with one more example just to follow the standard 5 paragraph, (1 intro, 3 body and 1 conclusion) that’s what I usually do and has gotten me just a 10 and most recently an 11.</p>