Does anyone want to critique my unusual college essay?

It’s about playing piano. I’ve already submitted it but I never got a chance to get some peer editing on it, so may as well now. It’s the Uchicago essay.

Yes I will love to…

What’s the point if it’s already been submitted?

And why run the risk that someone else will then use your essay-- and it will be flagged for plagiarism?

Agree with @bjkmom. And don’t EVER share anything with a new user or a person who has very few posts.

@bjkmom - There are always opportunities to edit strong essays and use them again, so the effort is rarely in vain. I

I’d be happy to look at it and comment. I’d also recommend not sharing your essays with new users.