I want to know what my essay should be scored out of 10, if you would like to score my essay, pls send me a pm.
Based off of the bit of it that you had in another thread (with the weezy joke), aside of the weezy joke, it is still poorly written and does more of “telling” instead of “showing.” You detail what happened and what you learned from the situations, but do more listing in a choppy manner instead of using your word count carefully. I am happy to read the rest of it for you, but, honestly, you have already sent it in, so there is nothing you can gain from a stranger telling you it is really good or really bad, except for anxiety.
I would hope it’s a different essay?