Hi!
I was just wondering if anyone out there would like to read my essay and give me some tips on how to make it better and more interesting. PM me so I can send it to you. Thanks
Nope, sorry-- it’s the end of the marking period at school. I have exams, report cards and Christmas all keeping me busy.
But what about your essay makes you think it’s not already interesting?
If your best friend read a stack of other essays, would he or she know which one was yours?
I could read it, just PM me
With all due respect to the previous poster…
Please send your essay only to adults with proven posting histories. I’m not volunteering at this point, but I’ll use myself as an example. If you click on my name, and then go to “threads” you’ll see evidence of a spouse, 3 kids, and a career. Any of those would probably be enough to indicate that I’m not a 17 year old kid looking to steal your essay. Look at the number of “likes” and “Helpfuls”-- that should further reinforce the credentials of a potential reader.
I am happy to read and give you feedback. I’m a mom, soon to have 3 in college. Have read many essays.
… and if you check on oscar63’s name and threads, you’ll see that she’s been a member since 2012, and made mention of that time of being a mom.
Just using her as an example-- @oscar63, I hope you don’t mind. But a quick check shows that her credentials check out. She’s obviously NOT a desperate 17 year old trying to steal anything from anyone.