Does my Common App fall under the "generic immigrant family" essay?

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<p>I didn't think it did, but after a friend reviewed he mentioned it might. Anybody want to read it over and give me advice?</p>

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<p>Anybody? :frowning: </p>

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<p>If you still need help, I can help you out. Just send me a quick PM. </p>