Does my essay answer the prompt effectively? Feedback appreciated!

<p>For the 4th essay question, I chose "Describe the world you come from and how it shaped who you are." I revised an essay that I've used for other schools with a similar question and on the Common app, which discusses a specific aspect of my life as opposed to a more general description of my "world." </p>

<p>I'd love the essay to be read; I'm a little nervous about whether it answers the question effectively - and in fact if that is actually a big concern for UVA admissions. </p>

<p>Thanks!!
Julia</p>

<p>I'll read it, send it to me!</p>

<p>i'll read it</p>

<p>i will too</p>