<p>So, I just finished editing my college essay for the umpteenth time (I'm applying early d. to williams). However, I'd like to know if it fulfills it's function/works, etc. It's a little bit different from most essays - if there is a category under which "most essays" fall, that is...</p>
<p>anyway, i'll send it to anyone who''d like it - please feel free to comment - </p>
<p>alos, corrections/suggestions/anything else you can think of is more than ok if you would like</p>
<p>thanks</p>
<p>nd</p>