Does this sound all right?

[thankyouall]

<p>The prompt for the scholarship is "why do I deserve this scholarship."</p>

<p>So, I basically wrote out the adversity I have overcome and what I have accomplished. Would it sound too arrogant if I talk too much of the things I have done and how it helped others?</p>

[pFNMCp]

<p>If they think that saying you deserve a scholarship more than anybody else is arrogant, then yes.</p>