Does this sound like a good essay topic?

College Essays
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<p>I'm thinking of writing how I'm from a somewhat rural school, which lacks diversity, and which in racism can be found.</p>

<p>I oftentimes get into arguments over racist comments people make, and I've lost friends and respect for people because of it.</p>

<p>The positive part is how I have been exposed to different cultures, by living part-time (with dad, divorced) in the decently sized city I'm closest to. I have also traveled to NYC and London.</p>

<p>I've made friends with some of the foreign exchange kids, and my last name is very strange, which sometimes gives others the impression that I'm foreign too.</p>

<p>Finally, I want to attend an urban school because of the diversity. Recently, I went to go see a prominent state school that's pretty rural and didn't like it at all. (And it happens to be a rival of the [urban] school this essay is for) </p>

<p>Do these all sound like a good essay?</p>

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<p>parts of the idea are certainly not original. no idea is, really. but in essence, it's up to you to take an idea that you feel is a fitting representation of who you are (and it seems you do) and make it an essay written originally.</p>

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<p>Try not to put any really offensive racist remarks in your essay. You never know who the admissions officer might be. O_o</p>