Does this sound too corny?

College Essays
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<p>Hi again everyone,</p>

<p>I tried a totally different idea for my CA essay, and I'm not sure if it worked or not. If anyone would be willing to take a look, I'd greatly appreciate it :) </p>

<p>-figureskater405</p>

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<p>I will! PM it to me if you’d like.:)</p>

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<p>Thank you so much! I PMed you :)</p>

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<p>Shameless bump…anybody else interested in reading my essay?</p>

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<p>Pm me I’ll check it out</p>

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<p>I’ll be happy to read if you still need anyone to edit~</p>

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<p>Thanks JonDrums and bubblyperfection…I’ve PM’ed you both :)</p>