ED deadline in 2 weeks. Can anybody please read my common app essay?

College Essays
1

<p>Post here and I'll PM you. I would really appreciate some feedback/help at this point.</p>

2

<p>bump. anybody?</p>

3

<p>sure ill read.</p>

4

<p>I can read it</p>

5

<p>bump. need more readers!</p>