Edit/help me cut down my essay on the best gift ever? DUE JAN. 2!!

College Essays
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<p>I'm about to go to sleep now (it's 3am..) but is anyone willing to quickly take a look at my essay if I send it to them once I wake up? I need to cut it down too, its around 900 words right now and I'd like it to be 750-ish, though there's no specified limit to the prompt so I don't want to cut it down to the point where it sounds too simple. Any help would be appreciated!</p>

<p>Thanks in advance!! :)</p>

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<p>I'm happy to look and edit.</p>

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<p>I can take a look if you want.</p>

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<p>anyone else? bump</p>

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<p>sure, pm me.</p>

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<p>submitted. thanks guys! :)</p>