Hello CC, I am new to this site but I was wondering if someone could take the time to review my essay and give me some constructive criticism. Thank you!
Exercise caution in who you send it to. The consensus is to look for senior members with many posts and a track record. You can check me out, for example. I’m a 65-year-old lawyer who enjoys [not always the right word] working with kids on their essays. Some have told me I was a big help, which is very gratifying. You can send me yours, and I’ll be happy to give you my thoughts. No Google doc links, please. They get scrubbed by CC, and I’ve never been able to get one to work. PM the text or email to my user name here as a gmail address. [I actually have a “J… Castillo” paralegal, so I like your user name.]