<p>We are doing an observation and interpretation for our AP English class.
Please post any improvements to the given observations if possible. Also please educate me about the level of my english.
Thank You</p>
<p>which observations</p>
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<li> Doc Homer is inarguably the most stubborn and obstinate character in Animal Dreams. His inability to listen to others counsel, especially his daughters, supports this fact. This inflexibility of his is the only blemish in his character. </li>
<li> Loyds character can be at best described as arty. His ability to twist situations becomes evident when Codi comprehends/realizes that he actually left cockfighting not due to her arguments but for his mother whom he doesnt want to antagonize.</li>
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