<p>Hey guys!</p>
<p>I just finished my Common App long essay and would love for someone to look at it. Any and all criticism is welcome.</p>
<p>Thanks so much!</p>
<p>Oh ya, and please, only people who are already in college or parents, etc.</p>
<p>:)</p>
<p>...please?</p>
<p>You don't have to read it now or anything... just within the next couple of days...</p>
<p>Thank you! :)</p>
<p>Bump, pretty please? anyone?</p>
<p>ill read it, but im an 08er</p>
<p>i will take a look at it.</p>
<p>I'm a mom and will read it for you.</p>