<p>Would an essay writing about how I used to be ungreatful, and not exactly appreciate all that I had until a certian event (small, seemimgly insignificant event) made me appreciate..or does that seem too "brat" like?</p>
<p>i think that wouldn't make you sound too "brat" like. In fact, i think admission officers would rather read those types of essays because they actually sound like you personally wrote it. (in contrast to Done By Daddy essays). </p>
<p>if you need revision or editing, just pm me and ill see what i can do</p>
<p>Also it might help if you could spell ungrateful right. Just pointing that out.</p>
<p>yea colleges always have the option of "write about an experience or an external influence in your life that caused you to be who you are today/think differently" you essay fits right in that category</p>
<p>"Also it might help if you could spell ungrateful right. Just pointing that out."</p>
<p>rofl i didnt even catch that.</p>
<p>haha oops! Thanks
I have issues with spelling</p>