need feedback on my essay

<p>I finished my common app essay this week. Anyone care to read and critique? I always have trouble with awkward sentences.</p>

<p>Also about the word limit. 630 words is fine right?</p>

<p>I think word limit is 250-500 words.
If you'd like, PM it to me, I love editing essays and I'll see if there's anything you can cut down to maybe come closer to the limit.</p>