my essay I need some critique

Applying to College
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<p>I have an essay done and need som critique, if anyone can help please PM me. </p>

<p>and a question : like on the Common APP, they said type and essay 250 - 500 words .... well are they strict on the words counted? currently my essays are 550 ish .. and the other one is 699 words . is that acceptable .. (I have two essays btw, and dunno which to pick) </p>

<p>thanks in advance</p>

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<p>I'll comment, and then tell you whether you really need the second one to be 200 words over limit, =)</p>

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<p>Same here, PM me</p>

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<p>PM it to me too, I'd love to read it!</p>

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<p>PM Me...i'll take a look</p>

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<p>PM me, I'll give comments...</p>

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<p>i'll take a look</p>