Essay Critique

<p>Umm...so i'm reading the common app prompt and somewhat editing the essays I've written before to fit it. Any harvard students that are already accepted or parents of accepted students, please help. I'll pm u the essay</p>

<p>you can pm me the essay if you want</p>

<p>b u m p ? ?</p>

<p>If you want my advice on it I'll take a look... but I'm also applying to Harvard this year so it's up to you.</p>

<p>you can pm me if you want</p>

<p>i would like to read it as well</p>

<p>thx guys but I dont feel comfortable giving essays to other applicants who are currently applying to the same colleges as I am...sorry</p>

<p>I am a Harvard admit and have written plenty of essays, so PM me if you want.</p>

<p>pm me if you want</p>

<p>to those of you that have read his essays (and are Harvard admits), pm me because I would like to discuss them with you because I can't decide how I feel about them.</p>

<p>PM them to me if you'd like.</p>