Essay Editing "Giveaway"

College Essays
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<p>Hi everyone,</p>

<p>I've gotten a lot out of CC over the last few years. Now, as I'm approaching the end of my time in college (man time has flown!), I'd like to give back in some way. After thinking for awhile about the best way to do so, I feel like I can contribute a lot to a few people's admissions essays.</p>

<p>A little about myself if you're curious: I'm a few weeks into my senior year at Harvard. I'm an Economics major planning on medical school. I have a fairly analytic approach to writing, and I believe my essays were definitely one of the strongest points of my application when I was applying for college. </p>

<p>Rules:
-PM me with an essay
-Include the prompt
-also write a few sentences about yourself and your college goals.
-[optional] post something in this thread that makes me laugh.</p>

<p>I'll try to help a handful of people at a time, but it'll depend on the number of people interested and my time constraints. </p>

<p>Cheers</p>

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<p>hello. if you had joined CC on 2008, and you are few weeks from entering senior year, it should mean that you joined CC just 1/2 month before you “went” to Harvard College. Is nt there some sort of discrepency. Well if you can make me sure you sure are near senior student, I will PM you with an essay. Else, why shall anyone give away their essay to some high school senior or anyone else? Does that make you chuckle? It sure does make me. …
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Joking. I have seen your other threads. I will PM you.</p>

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<p>haha</p>

<p>If anyone’s actually wondering about it, I was a lurker through high school and made this account around when I was deciding on college. And if you’re truly worried, I can send you a copy of my college essay.</p>

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<p>hurray… PM me i’d like to read one. a “harvard accepted essay” …
anyway. did you get my essay. I PMed it.</p>

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<p>i wanted to be a historian but i realized that there was no future in it.</p>

<p>did that make you laugh?
no?</p>

<p>there was a kidnapping in the park yesterday…somebody finally went and woke him up.</p>

<p>still no?</p>

<p>i went on a camping trip yesterday. it was in tents.</p>

<p>hahaha corny i know but hey i think they’re funny lols.</p>

<p>Im going to PM you thanks!</p>

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<p>I’ll PM you my essay. Thanks so much for offering to help!</p>

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<p>Funny Thing: For a final philosophy examination, the question was, “What is courage?” 3 minutes into a 3 hour exam, one student wrote,
“This is” and walked out.</p>

<p>The professor responded by writing on the exam, “No, that was stupid.”</p>

<p>hehe anyways thanks so much I messaged you</p>

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<p>Thanks. I’m applying as a transfer student, but could definitely still use some help on my essay!</p>

<p>Joke: Why were 5 and 6 afraid of 7? Because 7 8 9 and 10! (because 7 ATE 9 and 10… get it? HAH)</p>

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<p>Joke my math teacher just emailed me: Why don’t math teachers go to the beach?
Because they use sine and cosine to get a tan :D</p>

<p>Oh math jokes…</p>

<p>Thanks for doing this by the way, it is much appreciated :)</p>

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<p>Your inbox is full, but I would like some assistance if you’re not too busy.</p>

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<p>pleaseee pleasee help with mine. i’m applying early decision and would need it like this week though. so if you are going to edit mine please do it soon or else i’ll have already turned it in to my college counseling office :frowning: I’d really like your editing expertise before hand :slight_smile:
Thanks so much again <3</p>