Essay Feedback Please!

<p>Hey everyone,</p>

<p>I would love if someone could read my essays and give me some constructive feedback on them. Any grammar/spelling mistakes, clarification needed, add/delete anything... I would greatly appreciate your help!</p>

<p>My essay topics are from NYU's supplement in case you are wondering. I have two essays and each are about 260 words. I'll be happy to help edit your essay as well! Let me know & we can exchange our essays! =)</p>

<p>Sure! I’d be happy to read/exchange, and I’ve already read quite a few on here. PM me.</p>

<p>Send it over with the prompts! I’d be happy to help!</p>

<p>@pinkpokadot07 Thank-you so much! I’ll send you a PM once I finish editing my essay again!</p>

<p>@clienk Just finished messaging you! Check your PMs! (:</p>