Essay Help? :D

College Essays
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<p>It's a tad bit on the long side, ~700 words. It hasn't been through enough revisions, but I'd like some feedback on it. Not sure where to snip and prune.</p>

<p>Does anyone have some time to look at it and give me some feedback and pointers? Thanks guys! :)</p>

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<p>I will take a look of you’d like!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>yeah, pm it to me!</p>