Essay help please!

College Essays
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<p>Hey everyone,</p>

<p>So I've got two essays, one for the Harvard supplement, and one for the Common App. I just need to get a couple impressions on them; less so an evaluation of the language and mechanics, but more so as a reaction on the piece, as a work of writing. Also, please indicate which I should use for which! Harvard's my dream, so I'd definitely like to get the stronger essay in the slot that they put more weight on. </p>

<p>If you have the time, I'll send 'em right over. Thanks so much!</p>

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<p>I can understand why ur tense about ur essay…Harvard tends to have that affect :wink:
PM it to me and i’ll critique it for u, but im not gonna be gentle though!</p>

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<p>I’m about to submit my app soon so I’d be happy to critique them. I understand if you don’t want to send them to random people on the Internet though. I’m very picky about that myself :)</p>