<p>Hi, this is feels strange posting in the parents forum, but I'm really unsure about my essay. I already sent it to one school (Kenyon). The only other people who have read it are my parents, who said it was fine. However, it would be great to have another opinion on it. If anyone can read my essay, I'd really appreciate it. Thanks!</p>
<p>...bump...</p>
<p>hmm I guess I'll bump this one last time...</p>
<p>Hi,
I am backed up on all my responses. But you can send it to me; I would reply by tomorrow evening..</p>
<p>I sent it. (first time using the messaging, but I'm pretty sure it went)</p>
<p>I replied using PM as well.</p>
<p>Thanks for the comments. Any other takers?</p>
<p>I'll give it a shot. Keep in mind this is all in the spirit of my whirlwing posting Sorry, bored at work, then bored at home - thats what happens when you finish Christmas shopping early. I bet you are all jealous! </p>
<p>So yea, message it over. I would be glad to give it a read, but be aware, this is my first attempt.</p>