Essay! :(

<p>I've been told to post this on the parents forum... does anyone want to read my essay??
It's kinda different.. but then again, that's what they all say..
I've had a few people read it and they've liked it. but the tenses MIGHT be confusing?? </p>

<p>Any takers.. please!</p>

<p>I’ll try it. PM me.</p>

<p>Okay, I will PM it to you, thank you for volunteering!</p>

<p>Me too shay, if you still want feedback. I’m a writer and have read a TON of college essays as well.</p>

<p>Any other takers?! I’ve gotten a lot of mixed opinions!! Need more input</p>

<p>If you’ve gotten mixed opinions, that might be a signal in and of itself that you might be taking too risky an approach.</p>

<p>I wouldn’t go as far as saying that it’s risky. I just use an interesting analogy, and I’ve gotten mixed views as loving it or hating it. So I’m really unsure, but I REALLY don’t want to start all over.</p>

<p>Try trusting your instincts, combined with your educational training up to this point. That’s part of being a college student.</p>