<p>Alright, as the deadline for college applications approach, I am one of the few who still needs to finish up his essays. Anybody want to read/help me out with mine?</p>
<p>It's about me moving to America and about how I adapt to the new culture/language... sortof. It's about 70% done, and I had paragraphs about other but I kinda took it out. I need help organizing and putting my best points forward.
btw it started out as a Princeton essay with the favorite quote being something about experience, but I somehow need to make it a Commonapp essay.</p>
<p>Any help will be appreciated, thanks.</p>