<p>Hello,
I've finished writing my college application essay few weeks ago. However, I'm still not sure if it's really alright - I have particular doubts about its being personal. I'm an international student and I don't know anyone who can give me a reliable opinion about the essay. If anyone could help me and read my essay to just post a comment, I would be veeeery happy! </p>
<p>(I'll send it with PM)</p>