essay help?

<p>I just finished my first essay, and I would greatly appreciate any feedback? If anyone could spare any time to read it, just respond to this post and I will PM it right away. Thanks so much!!!!</p>

<p>please, I would really really appreciate any feedback!</p>

<p>i can read for you, but i may not give a very good critique.</p>

<p>thanks, anything would be great. i will send it</p>

<p>Ill read it if you want</p>

<p>thanks i will send it</p>

<p>Send it to me too :)</p>

<p>Never mind, you sent it already I think.</p>

<p>I'd be happy to read it. Where are you applying?</p>