<p>Hey guys, I'm looking for a couple of people to give me constructive criticism about my college essay on ping-pong. It's just a rough draft, but I feel like I need a couple more opinions on phrasing and style. I'm also willing to swap essays with anyone else. Applying to some Ivies, so if it's not up to par please tell me :).</p>
<p>hey ill read it! pm me.</p>
<p>I’ll read and critique it</p>