<p>I was hoping you guys could give me some constructive criticism/feedback on two of my college essays I'm planning to use. Neither is very long; one is 500 words on table tennis and the other is 400 words on improv. I really appreciate it!</p>
<p>table tennis… are you asian? because if you’re asian and you write an essay on table tennis… it’s kind of stereotypical. but of course if you write it well, then it shouldn’t be a problem</p>
<p>I’m white, so hopefully a table tennis essay might help me stand out a bit.</p>
<p>I’ve gotten a couple of responses, but any more feedback would be great.</p>
<p>any topic is great as long as you can pull the “wow” effect that I call it but yeah overall it seems adequate</p>
<p>Send it over!</p>
<p>pm it over. i want to read it</p>