Essay Question?

<p>I've been through quite a bit in my life. Most of it hasn't been spent on trips to debate championships or volunteering at hospitals . (Just to clarify I have'nt done either) I am from a small town where the number of antique stores probably rivals farm acreage. :) </p>

<p>When i say i have been through alot i'm refering not to academics, or swimming, or anything else i have ever done. These things define me, yes, but don't illustrate what i believe to be just as big a part of me.</p>

<p>One of my parents has struggled with mental illness and substance abuse for as long as i can remember. I have been down roads i don't really care to look back on. However, throughout everything I've seen and wished I hadn't, I know that i am undoubtedly more passionate and committed to trying not only to help my parent, but help myself out of the chains of small town america and it's unspoken problems.</p>

<p>This is not my essay it's merely a synopsis of a topic I am having trouble dealing with. This topic is a bigger part of my life than any group i ever belonged to in High School and not mentioning it hurts. Although quite taboo it defines so much of me that I do a disservice in avoiding it.</p>

<p>I don't intend to garner pity or self loathing pleasure from it...I just merely want to give my colleges a realistic desription of my background and my point of view. Mental illness is a difficult topic on a social level and i am curious if an admission board would be receptive to such a topic...</p>

<p>Is this a good start?</p>

<p>THNX- Sock :)</p>

<p>Sock, Anything you can write that brings out the "YOU" in an essay will work. I can tell just by your post that you have a great story to tell. Go for it!</p>

<p>Thanks...I was kind of scared.</p>

<p>I wasn't getting much feedback.</p>

<p>I was surprised too that no one had replied. You have a good basic idea. Just remember to center your essay around you and not your parent. It is important that you write how the issue has affected you. I think depression and dependency is no longer the taboo subject it once was. Everyone has been touched by the disease somehow. Either directly through a family member or relative or coworker. I think it has great potential for an essay.</p>