<p>Just revamped my essay and I think its pretty good. I'd like someone to read it and tell me what they think. The topic is:</p>
<p>Describe a setting in which you have collaborated or interacted with people whose experiences and/or beliefs differ from yours. Address your initial feelings and how those feelings were or were not changed by this experience.</p>
<p>I write a four page essay in how my views were changed from "the losers at the park" to the "unlucky souls who never got a fair chance"</p>
<p>I'd love to post it here, but I'm not sure it's the best idea. Someone could steal it. Please respond if you're interested and I'll PM you! It is sooooo greatly appreciated! Thanks!!! :)</p>
<p>Awesome ill send it to you!!
One problem I just realized 
I spent a lot of time on it and I feel it came out great, but it’s 1653 words long=wayyyyyy too long. Of course I can cut out a bunch, probably widdle it down to 1000 if I really tried, but that’s still twice the 500 word limit 
What should I do?</p>
<p>Okay, well I’m really sad right now cause I had this whole long thing written for you but it just cleared.:’( Can you maybe PM your email so I can send you an edited(and shorter version) of your essay. If not cool:) I will just tell you all the things I think you should change.:)</p>
<p>Okay, well I’m really sad right now cause I had this whole long thing written for you but it just cleared.:’( Can you maybe PM your email so I can send you an edited(and shorter version) of your essay. If not ,cool:) I will just tell you all the things I think you should change.:)</p>
<p>Ok I PMed you again! Thanks 
Anyone else?</p>
<p>What does that mean?</p>
<p>I would be honored to read your fabulous essay! I have extensive experience in editing and tutoring, so I might be a boon to you. 
Just PM it to me, and I’ll critique it as harshly as you need me to.</p>
<p>I sure did, thank you sooo much!!! :)</p>
<p>Anyone else interested?</p>
<p>Hey! So your email isn’t showing? Not sure what to do?</p>