<p>It's a 250 word essay in response to this prompt:
Everyone belongs to many different communities and/or groups defined by (among other things) shared geography, religion, ethnicity, income, cuisine, interest, race, ideology, or intellectual heritage. Choose one of the communities to which you belong, and describe that community and your place within it.</p>
<p>I'm not so confident in it, and I'd like to have a few other opinions.</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
<p>I will if you want? Can you read mine in return? They’re kind of similar prompts too! I wrote mine about my upbringing and how it’s impacted my major/future. PM yours if you want!</p>
<p>I’ll take a look :)</p>
<p>I’d love to read it! PM me and I will do my best to give you an accurate critique.
Also which schools are you applying?</p>
<p>I’m applying to Michigan State and maybe some others.</p>
<p>Sure! I could use a break from writing my own essays lol…</p>
<p>I’ll edit yours if you want.</p>
<p>Anyone else?</p>