<p>benhpark,
I know it. In my familly nobody don’t speak english and don’t know it, that’s why I need to use Online Course essay grading machine. I chososed my own style.I know history of my hometown, and I’m using it.
Here is my ESSAY CollegeBoard scored 12/12, what your give for it?</p>
<p>Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below.</p>
<p>If we valued honesty, we would be willing to risk our jobs to become whistleblowers and tell truths that our employers did not want revealed. If we valued success, we would give up our free time in order to excel in a subject or sport. In other words, the sacrifices we are willing to make reveal what we care about the most.</p>
<p>Assignment:
Can what we value be determined only by what we sacrifice? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.</p>
<p>Your Response:</p>
<p>For solving problem or making assigment we must have several temper characteristics.The most important characteristic, first of all, must be wish to do something.If we don’t have it, nothing we can do.Then we must ask ourself what we can do? And then make decision and realize our plan.Sacrifice is one of possible solution to the problem when there’re no choise and the problem is very important.For sacrifice must be two circumstances: no possible solution and no other choises.
During our life we sacrifice a lot.It can be time, money, job, house and etc.There is good Rusian idiom “When we loose, then we value.” It means that we cannot value thing if we have it, and we began conscious only when we loose it.According to people wise, we cannot value thing when we have it because we have nothing to compare.
For example, you must prepare for exam in 3 month and this exam is very important.So, you leave everything behind you, you live with exam.You sacrifice your job, money, enjoings.
We understand how important the exam, but ,in this time, we are all other things short.Our life is limited.And then we figure out how important were the things which we lost.This example, from my life experience, confirm statement that me value things only when we lost it.
But for this rule, as for many others, exist exeption.We value thigs when we have it, only if we cannot live without it, and see possible consequances for loosing it.For instance, if our life depend on somobody, we can’t imagine it without it.
Lets review historical events and what place sacrifice had in history.According to early history sacrifice developed in bronze era.But we must understand, that theretimes sacrifice was in it’s direct meaning.People sacrificed their lifes in order to safe their homeland from foreign occupations.One example is samurais in Chine.They were patriots of their homeland and believed that it’s better to die than to allow foreign people occupate their territory.From history of my homeland, Azerbaijan, I can name a lot of herous, but the most brave was Javad Khan in Gandja.When Russia planed to occupate it, he sacrificed his life, in order to safe his homeland.Loose of life we can’t value, it’s impossible, but our relatives can.And only they can value loose of us.It’s another confirmation for the statement in second paragraph, that we value only when we loose.It’s very sad to think about this, but this is true.
In conclusion, I can say that sacrifice made its way from early periods to nowadays, and in future, I hope, it will continue its existance.</p>