<p>I have written the first draft of my why penn essay. If anyone is interesting in critiquing it or give me some guidelines to follow, please leave your sn so i could pm you my essay, thanks</p>
<p>i can try.</p>
<p>I'll take a look!</p>
<p>i can take a look</p>
<p>i'll take a look. i'm kinda harsh but i mean well</p>
<p>send it to my personal message if u want my help!</p>
<p>ill take a look</p>
<p>if you need another opinion, i would be happy to take a look.</p>