explanation for suspension

<p>I hope I'm in the right place..</p>

<p>I was suspended during freshmen year and the school I'm applying to has a place to write an explanation for it. I wrote a short paragraph about it and I want to know what others opinion after reading this. I'm too embarrassed to put it here so if anyone is willing to help out, I will pm it to you directly. Any advice or thoughts are welcome and any help is greatly appreciated. </p>

<p>Thanks.</p>

<p>I’ll read it.</p>

<p>@illusiondestiny
Thanks!
Just pmed you.</p>