Feedback on my UC personal statement?

College Essays
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<p>Preferably someone who isn't submitting their application too today...</p>

<p>I'll message you my essay. I have gotten some feedback but could always use a little more before I submit.</p>

<p>I'd be happy to read yours if it's non-UC if you want as well!</p>

<p>Please & thank you!</p>

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<p>Pleeeease!! Anyone?</p>

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<p>I already submitted my UC essay; you can drop me a PM :D</p>

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<p>Just sent!</p>