<p>Anyone willing to proofread/give some feedback one of my two UC transfer essays? I'll send it in a message. Preferably someone who's not in the midst of submitting UC applications right now.</p>
<p>I did get some feedback from professors/friends but changed a lot over the last few days and don't want to bug them again on a holiday.</p>
<p>Hello Sherry, I’ll read it, though I don’t have much experience, I’ll be able point out grammatical errors and overall tone of the the essay. I’m not applying to any of the UCs.
Would you read mine?</p>